new taipa bridge

I think that they should build a diffrent bridge in taipa because the current one is to old. 

Firstly they should build a 2 lane bridge so people dont have to wait. Cause what its like at the moment is it has a one lane bridge. Also people have to wait for the other people to cross.

Secondly they should build a  bike track. Cause some people ride bikes sometimes. And if they dont build a bike track then the people that ride there bike will have to ride where the cars ride and they might get ran over.

Thirdly they should build a jump way too So some people could jump off the jump way on the bridge. It has a fence on the walking and biking space and you will have to climb onto the fence and jump but some one might push you in and you might fall in when you wernt ready.

Lastly we must build a new bridge because if you keep the old bridge then you will have to wait for a long time. Thats why they need to build a new bridge. It will be awesome if we had a new bridge because we dont have to wait for a long time.

By ocean.

for 2 decades mark laurent and brenda liddiard have been playing music together part of  that secret army of indie musicians who fly just below the commerical radar playing grass roots mostly unplugged music througout new zealand australia and the UK for them songs and poetry and humour are ways to talk about life the universe and everything they are also well known in acoustic music circles as solors performers. marks backround in blues/rocks gives his perfomances a distinctive edge: the highlight of the entire evening took place when mark launched into some blues (to a discearning audeince in a blues festival town) during which he played blistering brilliant acoustic guitar licks while voice-mimicking lead guitar sounds note for note nuance for nuance in a materful disaplay of technique and taste the stands as one of our clubs most memorable performances to this day.Not only that but he had em alternately cracking up with laughter or grooving and clapping he almost brought the house down brendon mook hanley byron vista social club byron bay NSW. ocean.

Write an “I am” poem

I know I can do this when I Use the template to write my poem Write each line in full sentences        Use punctuation correctly like A . , !

I am ocean I wonder that if my friends are nice to me I hear birds singing in the trees I want a hover board I pretend that i am a youtuber I feel good I worry about my family and my pets I touch my stuff I understand the school rules I say nice words I try to do hand springs I hope that clowns aint real I am 8 years old

Two Stars and a wish

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All about me!

I am learning to write an autobiography about myself I will be successful when I can Use a plan to generate ideas for my story (Y-chart) Introduce who I am Describe what I look like, what I like to do and some interesting facts about me. Include WOW words in my writing Begin to revise and edit my work

Ko mamaru te waka Ko kahutianui taka tupuna Ko ngatikahu te iwi Ko ocean toko ingoa My name is ocean I have back and purple curly hair I also have tanned skin I have got brown eyes I have got short eyelashes

Two stars and a wish

I think we should be able to go fishing every 2 weeks.

My first reason is because we get to go outside and get some fresh air and exercise which is good for our lungs.

Secondly I love eating fish especially when I have caught it myself.

Thirdly if you are lucky enough to have your Uncle helping on the day, he might buy you a yummy ice cream.

That is why I think that we should be able to go fishing every 2 weeks.

Term 2 Reflection

Who is it?

We are learning to make our writing more interesting by using precise words and adding detail. To practise this, we have been describing a buddy. Can you guess who it is?