Friday, 10 March 2017


All about me!

I am learning to write an autobiography about myself

I will be successful when I can
  • Use a plan to generate ideas for my story (Y-chart)
  • Introduce who I am
  • Describe what I look like, what I like to do and some interesting facts about me.
  • Include WOW words in my writing
  • Begin to revise and edit my work

Ko mamaru te waka

Ko kahutianui taka tupuna

Ko ngatikahu te iwi

Ko ocean toko ingoa


My name is ocean

I have back and purple curly hair

I also have tanned skin

I have got brown eyes

I have got short eyelashes
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      


Two stars and a wish


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