Ocean's Blog
"Nau Mai haere mai - Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience. There maybe mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Friday, 29 September 2017
Monday, 4 September 2017
Things to do if you are Spring.
Make people plant new trees.
Sprout flowers under ground.
Be warmer than winter.
Make the days longer.
Make the air smell sweet as sugar candy.
Disappears when summer comes.
Friday, 9 June 2017
I am from purple earings
[an object that is special to you
From barbie dolls and teddy bears
[two objects from when you were little]
I am from the deck had a view out to sea
[a phrase describing the first house you remember]
And it was white
[another phrase describing the first house you remember]
I am from a feijoa tree
[a tree or plant that you remember as a cild]
Whose the fruit is big and juicy
[write a simile to describe that tree or plant]
From cheryll and bruce
mum dad
I am from macaroni cheese and spaghetti bolognese
[food you eat that are sigificant in your family
I am from i had lots of barbie dolls
[memory you have from when you were little
I am from those moments i would dance around in my purple sparkly dress
[finish with a thought or a repeat a line or idea from earlier in the poem]
[an object that is special to you
From barbie dolls and teddy bears
[two objects from when you were little]
I am from the deck had a view out to sea
[a phrase describing the first house you remember]
And it was white
[another phrase describing the first house you remember]
I am from a feijoa tree
[a tree or plant that you remember as a cild]
Whose the fruit is big and juicy
[write a simile to describe that tree or plant]
From cheryll and bruce
mum dad
I am from macaroni cheese and spaghetti bolognese
[food you eat that are sigificant in your family
I am from i had lots of barbie dolls
[memory you have from when you were little
I am from those moments i would dance around in my purple sparkly dress
[finish with a thought or a repeat a line or idea from earlier in the poem]
Friday, 19 May 2017
I wish i was jayda.
Because she is spoiled.
And because she is good at singing.
She also is a great friend.
She lives with a lot of people.
I wish i was jayda.
She lives in lake ohia.
And she lives by my house.
She has three brothers.
She has darkbrown eyes.
She has dark brown hair with a little bit of gold.
And she has tane skin.
She is really funny.
She has curly hair.
Friday, 7 April 2017
new taipa bridge
I think that they should build a diffrent bridge in taipa because the current one is to old.
Firstly they should build a 2 lane bridge so people dont have to wait. Cause what its like at the moment is it has a one lane bridge. Also people have to wait for the other people to cross.
Secondly they should build a bike track. Cause some people ride bikes sometimes. And if they dont build a bike track then the people that ride there bike will have to ride where the cars ride and they might get ran over.
Thirdly they should build a jump way too So some people could jump off the jump way on the bridge. It has a fence on the walking and biking space and you will have to climb onto the fence and jump but some one might push you in and you might fall in when you wernt ready.
Lastly we must build a new bridge because if you keep the old bridge then you will have to wait for a long time. Thats why they need to build a new bridge. It will be awesome if we had a new bridge because we dont have to wait for a long time.
By ocean.
Monday, 27 March 2017
for 2 decades mark laurent and brenda liddiard have been playing music together part of that secret army of indie musicians who fly just below the commerical radar playing grass roots mostly unplugged music througout new zealand australia and the UK for them songs and poetry and humour are ways to talk about life the universe and everything they are also well known in acoustic music circles as solors performers. marks backround in blues/rocks gives his perfomances a distinctive edge: the highlight of the entire evening took place when mark launched into some blues (to a discearning audeince in a blues festival town) during which he played blistering brilliant acoustic guitar licks while voice-mimicking lead guitar sounds note for note nuance for nuance in a materful disaplay of technique and taste the stands as one of our clubs most memorable performances to this day.Not only that but he had em alternately cracking up with laughter or grooving and clapping he almost brought the house down brendon mook hanley byron vista social club byron bay NSW. ocean.
Friday, 10 March 2017
Write an “I am” poem
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I know I can do this when I
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I am ocean
I wonder that if my friends are nice to me
I hear birds singing in the trees
I want a hover board
I pretend that i am a youtuber
I feel good
I worry about my family and my pets
I touch my stuff
I understand the school rules
I say nice words
I try to do hand springs
I hope that clowns aint real
I am 8 years old
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Two Stars and a wish
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Kaiako comment
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